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Wednesday, May 16, 2018

My Amazing Story About The Holidays

I wrote a story on week 1 about the school holidays. It was fun but really annoying. I learned how to work with someone else without being loud.

Enjoy reading!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Kuini, I always love reading your stories as you make them interesting by including descriptive language and interesting sentences. You should have included in your introduction that you were learning to write connecting phrases between paragraphs. Remember how you learned to use dialogue or phrases to show the passing of time.

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