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Thursday, June 7, 2018
You can show but not tell
My class and I are learning how to show not tell in our writing. I just learned how to show not tell in my writing. I made a paragraph of writing with show not tell in it. I also high lighted the parts where I showed but didn't tell. And show not tell is when you show where you are or how you are feeling without actually saying it.
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Well done Kuini. You showed you were in a forest where forestry workers were. You also showed your fear rather than saying you were afraid. Very imaginative.
ReplyDeleteGreat introduction to your work too.
Well done.